I had to trash over 700 words and now I am sad.
@dragonpressgraphics @samanddeaninpanties
In a lot of ways it’s good because all the stuff I cut can be reworked and put in other places, it was just really front loaded w/world building. So that’s good.But I think I need to change POV of the peice. It’s supposed to be an easy, shotgunning, endverse foursome but angst keeps getting in the way and Dean’s being an asshole. So. Ugh.
@samanddeaninpanties
He’s jealous. 😉 He’s not trying to be a dick he just is.
I’m gonna have to switch. The tone’s jacked up and I was it to be melancholy. He’s too… I dunno? Too bitter maybe? Oh well. I have three other characters here. One of them has to be the right one, right?